Not bad.

I thought it flowed well, and worked well with the music.
- Could be more exiting.

Oh no.

A few things, dont be submiting trailers submit that to the ALPHAS ok?
Graphics and sound quality need to improve alot!
Tween Tween Tween is all i saw with text.

To much space for improvment, needs to be thought through and remade with more time taken and alot better quality.

Simple but sweet.

Newgrunds suck up ? Lol yes but nice design add music then to finnish add hil dancing or something in what you choose to make him wear. Just some ideas to improve the game, BASIC

I thought...

It was very good i thought the storyline was very good, The graphics could of been better as in the ladders ect.. Could have been made more realistic. Apart from that well done.

Not bad...

Not bad it's about time some one made a decent Hand book for New Grounds, Could be made alot better tho.